As far as referring back to the Joad's hardships, you did a good job. Maybe you could add a personal connection to how the Joad's struggles relate to yours. Other than that, this was a nice summary.
As far as referring back to the Joad's hardships, you did a good job. Maybe you could add a personal connection to how the Joad's struggles relate to yours. Other than that, this was a nice summary.
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