Your essay followed and answered the prompt good. Your thesis statement was very good it something that any reader connect to. I liked how your connection to the movie not only is a challenge to you, but also to anyone.
I like how you use challenges with the movie. Also how tough times can separate a family but being strong can keep it together.
Your essay followed and answered the prompt good. Your thesis statement was very good it something that any reader connect to. I liked how your connection to the movie not only is a challenge to you, but also to anyone.
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